Any help to strengthen this headline?

[Glenn]

Thanks Mike,

You Might Test Changing the Color of the BRIBE Purse to Purple.

Then Blue.

Then Change One Purse color to Blue and the other Purple.

Glenn

P.S. - I just spoke to wife of a guy WE are doing a new website for.

She wanted, "A 1 page landing Page BLACK Background like their Logo."

I explained BLACK is not good unless she sells to VAMPIRES.

Plus a Mentor - Ted Nicholas.

Used to Use REVERSE TYPE - Black CAPS Headline with the Words

THIS IS AN AD.

Atop all his newspaper and magazine Ads.

BECAUSE NOBODY READS All CAPS Reverse Type!