-TW
September 24, 2008, 09:57 PM
Some of you may know that I tend to pick up on copy mistakes that slip by the writer(s) somehow.
Here's another example...
There's a guy running for senate here locally (Albany, NY area). He's running on the SLOGAN -- "COMMON SENSE."
Here's his site...
http://roymcdonaldforsenate.com/
Click on the video on the right -- and listen VERY CAREFULLY to the second line he says. Then tell me if this guy has 'common' sense!
When you write copy, go over it MANY TIMES -- make sure it MAKES SENSE!
Cheers!
-- TW
Here's another example...
There's a guy running for senate here locally (Albany, NY area). He's running on the SLOGAN -- "COMMON SENSE."
Here's his site...
http://roymcdonaldforsenate.com/
Click on the video on the right -- and listen VERY CAREFULLY to the second line he says. Then tell me if this guy has 'common' sense!
When you write copy, go over it MANY TIMES -- make sure it MAKES SENSE!
Cheers!
-- TW