MichaelFu
October 19, 2008, 03:36 AM
Hi there,
I just finished my first opt-in page today.
Here is my website => URL REMOVED BY MOD
I would like to ask for a critique of this site such as:
- How do you like the design of the page?
- Does it look okay in other browser?
- How does copywriting on this page? (I.E. pre-headline, main headline, bullet, call to action)
- What would make you want to join this list?
- Is there anything on this page that would keep you from joining my list?
- etc...
Thank you for your kind advice :-)
- Michael Fu
I just finished my first opt-in page today.
Here is my website => URL REMOVED BY MOD
I would like to ask for a critique of this site such as:
- How do you like the design of the page?
- Does it look okay in other browser?
- How does copywriting on this page? (I.E. pre-headline, main headline, bullet, call to action)
- What would make you want to join this list?
- Is there anything on this page that would keep you from joining my list?
- etc...
Thank you for your kind advice :-)
- Michael Fu