None of the above....
 

You wanna know why? because I'm tired.

Same old headlines, same old stuff. I'm sure there are gizillions of people lined up waiting for this stuff.

But I'm not. I'm done...

Tell me something I don't know... Give me headline that grabs an OLD WORN OUT persons attention. Ya know there are plenty of us out here....

I would call it "How to make a living when you are old, tired, frustrated and broke.." hotsheet.

AND remember this: empathy AND sympathy play a MAJOR part in your writings.... Not every business is right for every person. BUT if you determine 'where' the mind of your reader is, you might be on the right track. AND if your headlines convey that message then more power to ya.

later..
Pappy

Re: None of the above....
 

Pappy,

I love your headline. I'd change it slightly:

"A simple, proven way to make $5K a month when you are old, tired, frustrated, and broke."

I do not want a 15-video training. I want a single video that lasts 1 minute, 58 seconds, and covers everything.

Maybe that's because I'm old and tired?

Richard Dennis

Fast Cheap FAILURE is the Key to Finding Successful Products
 

Thanks Pappy,

Yours is a valid Vote.

As I said, 19 ideas of 20 FAIL when you're testing.

IF YOU Are Feeling Old and Tired, however.

Here are 3 Best Selling E-books
Already Tested and SO FANTASTIC we give a 365 day 100% munny back
Guarantee on.

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I - How to Knock Out Stress in 30 Seconds or Less

http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=87

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II - A 5000 Yr Old Extra Energy Exercise Taught me by a World Famous Surgeon

http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=80

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III - How to Smooth Pain From The Body with Your Hands (OR Shoot Chi
Energy at people)

http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=74

Thanks,
Glenn

P.S. - While I'm waiting to get a few more votes - OR Perhaps TEST Totally
Different Book Ideas.

You can - at least - Check out what 3 Tested WINNING Headlines and sales
letters look like. Each letter grossed 1000's on Ebay.

Re: YOUR OPINION - Which Book Will U Pay Cold Cash For?
 

Glenn ...

It has to be "A" since marketing is the key to success in any business.

Jim

Re: YOUR OPINION - Which Book Will U Pay Cold Cash For?
 

Really like this one:

"What I Learned From a Street BUM Who Just Bought His Own House
with CASH."

Millard

9 Chapter AudioBook BRIBE for Your OPINION
 

Thanks Dien,

FAILURE is GOOD.

Fast Failure is better.

I noticed 8 of 11 of the Votes for the 1st Five Books are my VIP Ezine Folks.

So.

SOB
WIMPER
MOAN

(Glenn wipes away a tear.)

TEST #1 at Sowpub FAILED. I know cuz Nobody Voted. EPIC FAIL - Sort of.
Not enough votes to be SURE. But the "BUM Book" is a Maybe.

We need more Fast Failures.

So.

Thinking Quickly.

We decided to Offer a HUGE BRIBE for more Opinions.

To My List.

I Added a 9 Chapter - BRIBE FOR YOUR OPINION - and sent it out to my
Customer List who LUV The Quality of my ADDED VALUE BRIBES.

HERE'S
What
THE
AUDIO Chapter BRIBE
Looks
Like:

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ONE - The 9 Chapter BONUS BRIBE List

HEADLINE - “How Steve Jobs Set Himself Up to Starve or Freeze If He Didn’t
Hypnotize 2 or 3 Coeds a Day - Book #1”

SUB-HEAD - "How Steve's College GirlFriend Watched Him Test NLP Selling
Strategies w/100's of Coeds"

-----------------------------
TABLE OF CONTENTS

INTRODUCTION - A Chat w/A Billionaires College GirlFriend

CHAPTER #1 - DIRECTIONS on How to Adjust Your Thinking About The
(International Criminal Olga Story.)

CHAPTER #2 - Sugar-Packet-Elevator Hug FLIRT CASE STUDY - Russian
Cosmetics SalesWoman I Met At Nordstroms.

CHAPTER #3 - Olga WORE OUT Her Sugar Packet In Twelve Hours!

CHAPTER #4 - How Steve Jobs Used Sugar Packet Anchors to Get Free Meals
from Coeds. (PART I)

CHAPTER #5 - How Steve Jobs Used Sugar Packet Anchors to Get Free Meals
from Coeds. (PART II)

CHAPTER #6 -Olga Veggie Restaurant CASE STUDY - Olga Calls and Asks for
Advice. She Says She is part owner of a Vegetarian Restaurant.

CHAPTER #7 - Cosmetics CASE STUDY - Olga Now Asks For Help Boosting
Her Cosmetics Sales to Affluent Women. (She Reports Fantastic Results in
boosting tips.)

CHAPTER #8 - I Visit Nordstroms. The Manager Tells me Olga is #1 in
Perfume and Cosmetics Sales.

CHAPTER #9 - Dates for Daughter CASE STUDY - Olga Calls for Help Getting
Her Daughter (Chaperoned) Dates With Rich Men At Veggie Restaurant.

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TWO - The 3 Book Ideas You VOTE on:

A - What I Learned from 400 Mil lion Mentor Jim Straw About How to Choose
Munny Making Ideas Where No S elling is Needed (20 Case Studies)

B - What I Learned From A Street BUM Who Bought His House for C ash

C - How to 2X - 3X - 5X Then 10X Your Sales OVER-NITE w/The Best Idea I Ever Discovered After 23 Years of Interviewing 100’s of Self Made Millionaires

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We ALREADY Have
Dozens of Votes.

Letter A and C are Neck and neck. B is last.

Thanks,
Glenn Osborn

P.S. - VIP's Who've already made munny with my other E-books LUV
To tell Us what They Want us to Create NEXT.

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Here's a PHOTO of the 9 FREE Audio Chapters at the Archive.Enchantednlp.com

https://img.skitch.com/20120719-mx9e...jirypsnec2.jpg

Re: 9 Chapter AudioBook BRIBE for Your OPINION
 

Out of those three choices, my winner is:
C - How to 2X - 3X - 5X Then 10X Your Sales OVER-NITE w/The Best Idea I Ever Discovered After 23 Years of Interviewing 100’s of Self Made Millionaires

Here's Your 9 AudioChapter ThankU For Voting BRIBE - Mr STD
 

Thanks STD,

Your Headline Choice is in the lead - so far in the voting.

Good for you!

Glenn Osborn

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Your THANK YOU REWARD or Info BRIBE...

Visit - www.Archive.enchantednlp.com

And look for THESE 9 STEVE JOBS Audio Chapter Links 8 inches down the middle of the page.

https://img.skitch.com/20120719-mx9e...jirypsnec2.jpg

Glenn

Re: YOUR OPINION - Which Book Will U Pay Cold Cash For?
 

Of the last three options ... they all interest me (not to the tune of $99 each, but they do interest me!).

Forced to pick one, I'd go with C ... only because the source is interviews with millionaires ... while the other two options source only one person each ... JM Straw and the BUM.

JM is amazing, though I wish there was a way to unsub from his mailing list. I'm on multiple times and get duplicates! But I guess my pick is for a team of millionaires over one marketing genius.

Thanks For Voting Robert J
 

Thanks Robert,

You were able to LISTEN to the 9 AudioChapter BRIBE
at my Archive - right?

Glenn