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MikePT February 14, 2022 07:20 AM

Any help to strengthen this headline?
 
Pros, any help to strengthen this headline for a Facebook AD (running only at the Feed for smartphones)?

Isn't adding "ATTENTION LADIES:" and "...For You" will made it to long?

Thanks.

FREE OFFER UNTIL FEBRUARY 21st The “Chic” Pink Bag When Buying The Elegant Cream Black Bag For You – LIMITED STOCK!

Dien Rice February 15, 2022 03:03 AM

Re: Any help to strengthen this headline?
 
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Originally Posted by MikePT (Post 42700)
Pros, any help to strengthen this headline for a Facebook AD (running only at the Feed for smartphones)?

Isn't adding "ATTENTION LADIES:" and "...For You" will made it to long?

Thanks.

FREE OFFER UNTIL FEBRUARY 21st The “Chic” Pink Bag When Buying The Elegant Cream Black Bag For You – LIMITED STOCK!

Hi Mike,

I know some people consider the photo / video to be more like the headline in Facebook ads... I think the reason why is because all the text throughout a Facebook ad is the same size, and there's no way to change that...

So, I know what some do is to test different photos in their Facebook ads, the way that people in print advertising would test different headlines...

It's worth testing! :)

Best wishes,

Dien

MikePT February 15, 2022 09:41 AM

Re: Any help to strengthen this headline?
 
Hi Dien,

Nice observation and comparasion on FB vs Print, and I agree. In special if it is visual/decorative product being advertised (as bags).

Thanks for the attention!

MikePT

Glenn February 17, 2022 05:43 PM

"Bruised Fashion" Handbag - Pink, Black & Blue 2 For 1 Lmtd 2-21-Offer
 
FREE OFFER UNTIL FEBRUARY 21st The “Chic” Pink Bag When Buying The Elegant Cream Black Bag For You – LIMITED STOCK!

Thanks Mike,

"Bruised Fashion" Handbag - Pink, Black & Blue 2 For 1 Lmtd 2-21-Offer"

Test That Mike.

I know you have Blue Bags Too.

Show Bags in each of the 3 Colors - Pink, "Black and Blue"

Might make ladies CURIOUS enough to LOOK.

Glenn

Can you show the LINK to the Bag offer?

Easier to Describe when we Can SEE it.

Glenn February 20, 2022 03:16 PM

A Better Headline for Mike
 
Thanks Mike,

While doing Research on WOMEN's BLING

I found a 35.00 Mini-Vac
for use in a car with over 100,000 THUMBS UP at amazon.

You have not shared what your Purses sell for

So.

Free Mini--Car-Vac w/Pink Bag Order

Glenn

MikePT February 23, 2022 08:47 AM

Re: Any help to strengthen this headline?
 
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Hi Glenn,

Thanks for the reply.

I already removed 1 of the AD I split tested. I split tested different images too.

I've got curious results:

• AD A: many inquires, 1 sale with discount;
• AD B: only 1 inquire as a full sale (without discount);

I attach here the AD B.

This AD was ran on Facebook Feeds only on smartphones only (my data shows is more profitable on there).

My idea on highlight the text was due the fact was going to be read on smartphones to facilitate and highlight the reading: "FREE OFFER Until Day 21 February – LIMITED STOCK"

If I run again a split test I will share here more details.

Thanks.

Glenn March 3, 2022 12:27 AM

You DO Know The Favorite Color for Women is PURPLE
 
Thanks Mike,

You Might Test Changing the Color of the BRIBE Purse to Purple.

Then Blue.

Then Change One Purse color to Blue and the other Purple.

Glenn

P.S. - I just spoke to wife of a guy WE are doing a new website for.

She wanted, "A 1 page landing Page BLACK Background like their Logo."

I explained BLACK is not good unless she sells to VAMPIRES.

Plus a Mentor - Ted Nicholas.

Used to Use REVERSE TYPE - Black CAPS Headline with the Words

THIS IS AN AD.

Atop all his newspaper and magazine Ads.

BECAUSE NOBODY READS All CAPS Reverse Type!


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