SOWPub Small Business Forums - Your opinion on this site, please...

Thanks for asking TW.

You do an excellent job in the beginning. Here are some of my thoughts on how it could be improved...

1. The header is a waste of space if all it has is a "home" link. If you'll be needing more navigational links (like About, Contact etc) then your current header is a good idea. Or else, you can narrow it down and bring the content - especially the video - higher up.

2. I think the usage of "The not-so-good news is..." is not needed. Because you aren't giving bad news as such. You're just showing them the barriers.

3. Not sure why you would want people to call you without qualifying themselves properly. Why not tell them at least something about your idea? If you don't want to do that - at least tell them what will be required of them. And what can they expect in return. Eg: You'll have to put in 10 hours of your time. Or your investment will be about $300. And you can expect 40-50 new clients. Or something to that effect.

4. Add testimonials to the page - or at least add a blurb that tells people who you are and why they should listen to you. If you don't have any testimonials for this venture - you could use general testimonials that tell how you have helped others in the past.