Re: We've opened up PROFILES....why not put yours up?
 

Hi Gordon I like the site a lot and if I was a golfer I would definately buy the course.

a couple of points,

The date on the home page is showing
Saturday, January 13, 2000

I also dont like the references to the 17 year old program I like to get the very latest gizmo's where possible so if I were writing the copy I would just put it down as

you can use this proven system tried and tested of many years instead of

You can use this 17 year old tested and proven system to take

and instead of educator in this paragraph I would put coach

HOW TO PLAY AN UNKNOWN GOLF COURSE" is a special audio program recorded by Master Golf educator G. Jay Alexander.

just my personal observations

regards peter

> Also, if you have a chance today, check out
> www.thinkandreachpar.com and give me some
> feedback on it.

> Thanks,

> Gordon Alexander