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Old September 22, 2000, 11:57 AM
Richard Dennis
 
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Default I certainly won't make any more comments about golfers, but if I was one, I know what I'd want ...

Gordon,

... I'd want 20 or 30 or 40 or 50 tantalizing bullets of info-bits, pulled right from the tape.

And if I was writing the piece, I'd transcribe the tape and then act as a bullet-seeking missile, going through every line of copy, deleting all the fluff, and leaving only the meaty sentences or phrases, then re-formatting them in the form of "Guess what this is" bullets designed to make even a golfer who needs Viagra want your tape instead.

It's a lot of work. But it works.

Richard