Hi Gordon!
Echoing a bit from Mike and Paul...my first thought was to move the "Do you have a golfer on your Holiday list?" to the place where the headline would normally be, like Mike I wondered about the headline. If I did have a Golfer on my list I would be immediately interested....
Also, like Paul, I was thrown by the TARP coming out of the blue, I was not sure what that meant. I almost felt like saying, "This method" or something generic would be more effective if you did not want to spell out the title again.
Silly me, I even thought you must have a son named Jay! Maybe you do? Maybe I am simply confused as it is a Friday afternoon after a long week?
Have a restful weekend, I have truly valued the postings of all the Pictogrigms. I printed, and hand copied mine. Thank you so much!
With Purpose and Passion,
JULIE
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