Jason,

Like Jim mentioned you really do need a good headline, and you could also benefit by including some testimonials and some kind of call to action. That's nice that you tell them what you do and list your phone number, but how about making them an offer like "Call us in the next 15 days for a FREE service worth $$$$$"

If you're working in a competitive market and want to charge premium services you'll really have to work hard to provide a permium level of service and develop some great relationships with these folks.

In any case, $500 a day 3 days a week is great money and I wish you much success with this!

Steve