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Old September 24, 2008, 09:57 PM
-TW
 
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Default Common sense?? HA!!

Some of you may know that I tend to pick up on copy mistakes that slip by the writer(s) somehow.

Here's another example...

There's a guy running for senate here locally (Albany, NY area). He's running on the SLOGAN -- "COMMON SENSE."

Here's his site...

http://roymcdonaldforsenate.com/

Click on the video on the right -- and listen VERY CAREFULLY to the second line he says. Then tell me if this guy has 'common' sense!

When you write copy, go over it MANY TIMES -- make sure it MAKES SENSE!

Cheers!

-- TW
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