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Old May 22, 2009, 05:02 PM
Bill
 
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Default Re: Has anyone ever tried a headline like this?...

Does your idea offer your potential clients irrefutable proof that it will work for them?

Does your offer take away all risk from the clients?

If you can't say yes to both of these questions, start over until you can.
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