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Old April 1, 2011, 07:13 PM
Bill
 
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Default Re: Text Marketing Machine - Flyer Critique

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Originally Posted by Bill View Post
It should be "you're" instead of your in the following part:
"your flooded with customers within hours."

Also, it looks like there is a space between bomb and bard, and there shouldn't be.

I meant to say that it should be "bombard", not bomb bard.
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