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Old October 24, 2006, 10:45 PM
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Default Re: Need opinions about my landing page.

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Originally Posted by Lawrence View Post
Woody,

That's simple and to the point.

I would suggest conjoining the words Forget and Proof with a dash.

"Forget-Proof"

Lawrence

Thanks Lawrence,

I made the change, as you suggested above.

In your other post, the second line wasn't drawing the viewer to me. But your suggestion did trigger a different call to action phrase.

From the Trouse
Woody Quiñones

Last edited by ImpactYourArea.com : October 24, 2006 at 10:56 PM. Reason: Just adding some additional comments
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