Hey Guys,

Could the group please give me some feedback on a possible headline for a sales letter i'm currently working on. It's for a business that provides training on employee productivity issues.
The goal of the sales letter is to get business owners/managers to say "hey, I want to learn more" and give me a call.

Here's 3 headline versions:

"Transforming Individuals Into Highly Productive, Results Driven Leaders, In Less Than 60 Days.
…..Results Guaranteed! "

"Transforming Key Employees Into Highly Productive, Results Driven Leaders, In Less Than 60 Days.
…..Results Guaranteed!"

"Transforming Businesses Into Highly Productive, Results Driven Profit Centers, In Less Than 60 Days.
…..Results Guaranteed! "

Any feedback will be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

Mitch