My advice for what it is worth is
Break the copy up. I'd be inclined to put the Money up front, something like How to Make $500.00 a Month Extra Income in Less than Four Hours.
Yes, you can make 125 dollars an hour by offering a membership site.
But, there is nothing wrong with what you have, I might suggest using the TWO steps, breaking it up a little bit with bullet points, and maybe use two columns in a frame for the example of searches.
Otherwise, it is fine. You could easily make sales the way it is, depends on who you are going to offer it to.
Heck, I might even start a couple of these membership sites, you make it sound so simple...IF only I knew anything about anything...dang it.
Gordon
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Originally Posted by Skip Rosell
Hi my friends,
RE: Non-Blind Copy
I am in the process of writing a new report. I could use some eyeballs on the draft at: http://skiprosell.com/member/
and let me know what you think. I am running a number of these memberships right now and it is working out great. In fact I have had one of the memberships in my signature for a while here on SowPub.
I could use some suggestions for the title, and any comments on the draft salesletter at the above link.
I have tried to give as much in the salesletter as I can so it is not blind copy. I tried the non-blind copy on one of my other reports (A-Frame Signs) and it worked great. No loss of sales because I gave so much away in the salesletter.
Any help you give me I will try to return in a great deal on the full report when done. The full report will have a PDF and videos showing exactly how I set this up on one niche. "case study niche"
Thanking you in advance for any comments.
Best of success,
Skip Rosell |