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Originally Posted by -TW
What I am most wondering about is the PACE. I was going after confident + deliberate, but I hope I didn't swerve into sleepy.
Also critique whatever other aspects you see fit to.
http://youtu.be/G25NxQczk44
Thanks!
-- TW
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It's 4 times as long as needed. At the 1:24 mark, I clicked away as you were saying how efficient you are, and I could see at least another minute to go.
Some minutes later I remember something about green but I have no idea what it is you want to say about green.
I liked your dying on the beach video better. It was a real video instead of a guy reading to me from the screen.