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Old January 3, 2012, 05:18 PM
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Default Re: Just put up a site looking for critiques

I just downloaded your book. It needs editing. It needs better content. A google.com search gives a better list of sites than your book. You should give your own description and your rating for a website and not copy paste emails the website owner sends you especially when the email replies you have received are so bad. I also dont understand why the bonus was a website link that has nothing to do with coupons or discounts or saving money. The book is not focused at all. It shows that you got tired with it yourself because the first 20 websites have their emails copy pasted and then you just copy paste a long list of websites without any description after that and tell people that now they have a list of over 100 links. I know its a free book but its not even worth that. You should improve your book with better content and editing before giving it away.
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