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Old September 16, 2012, 04:50 AM
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Hi, Skip - I'm going to agree with Cornell about the paragraphs aligning left - it makes it much easier to read; I can cope with centred text when reading a menu, but that's about all :O

I'm also with Cornell when it comes to the image - I created one you can use (but only if you like it!) - it's attached to this post.

Otherwise, the sales letter is a very good read

Margaret
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Old September 16, 2012, 12:27 PM
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Hi Cornell,

Thank you for your comments. Very good suggestions. I have used them all.

As soon as I finish the report I will let everyone know and do a great special.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell
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Hi Skip:

Going to throw in my 2 cents worth...

The graphic at the top needs to be redone or at least cleaned up some.

All of the content from the headline down to the Step boxes is centered...I would rather see it left aligned except for the "How to Make $500.00" and "It is just two easy steps" which should be centered.

I don't know what you are using to create the page... but for the "No setting up membership scripts, No content writing, Any niche you choose, and No hassles just monthly CASH!" .....I would use the <blockquote> html tag along with bullet points or check marks for each of the 4 points.

Trust you will advise us here on the board when the product is ready for purchasing.

Cornell
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Old September 16, 2012, 12:34 PM
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Hi Margaret,

Thank you for your input.

Yes I like the image and I'm using it. Thank you very much. That was very kind of you.

Glad you like the read. I wrote it just for you. Just kidding but that is the way I write. I write like I'm talking to one person. Some times it works and other don't. I guess it depends on the person you are thinking of.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell


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Hi, Skip - I'm going to agree with Cornell about the paragraphs aligning left - it makes it much easier to read; I can cope with centred text when reading a menu, but that's about all :O

I'm also with Cornell when it comes to the image - I created one you can use (but only if you like it!) - it's attached to this post.

Otherwise, the sales letter is a very good read

Margaret
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Old September 16, 2012, 02:22 PM
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Hi Skip,

The salesletter is pretty good.

I would make your subhead the main headline: How To Set Up Your Own Money Producing Membership-Site In One Hour Or Less!

I like your idea of creating email list memberships. Instead of messing with forums and stuff. Pretty good.

The main thing however is sales. And getting those 100 clients. I guess you'll be talking about that in your report? (If so, you should mention that in the salesletter.)

Also, what I would do. Instead of selling a report. Sell know-how about email membership course - in an email membership course format! (Even if its just a 2 month membership - because you have to give them all the info to setup right away...)
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Old September 16, 2012, 02:36 PM
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Hi Ankesh,

Thank you for your ideas.

I will have a video on how to set up but.....

I like your idea of an email course. There is a lot to email marketing that the average person does not know about or at least how to use correctly.

I will put in the salesletter that I will show them how to get traffic with and without a website.

Well I now have another project to think about.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

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Hi Skip,

The salesletter is pretty good.

I would make your subhead the main headline: How To Set Up Your Own Money Producing Membership-Site In One Hour Or Less!

I like your idea of creating email list memberships. Instead of messing with forums and stuff. Pretty good.

The main thing however is sales. And getting those 100 clients. I guess you'll be talking about that in your report? (If so, you should mention that in the salesletter.)

Also, what I would do. Instead of selling a report. Sell know-how about email membership course - in an email membership course format! (Even if its just a 2 month membership - because you have to give them all the info to setup right away...)
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Old September 16, 2012, 02:37 PM
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Hi, Skip - took a look at the image on the page; you need to edit the image properties because it still has the size of the previous image and is stretching the image. It should be 442 x 254 or I can redo it any size if you prefer

Cheers
Margaret
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Old September 16, 2012, 03:50 PM
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Thanks Margaret,

All fixed. Thanks for noticing.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

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Hi, Skip - took a look at the image on the page; you need to edit the image properties because it still has the size of the previous image and is stretching the image. It should be 442 x 254 or I can redo it any size if you prefer

Cheers
Margaret
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Old September 17, 2012, 01:35 AM
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Hi my friends,

RE: Non-Blind Copy

I am in the process of writing a new report. I could use some eyeballs on the draft at: http://skiprosell.com/member/

Skip, I fixed your member card image. It will go on a white background now and look a bit cleaner than what you have. I think you can just right click and save it from here.

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Old September 17, 2012, 10:09 AM
Skip Rosell
 
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Thanks Bozo,

I do appreciate the effort you put in. I will use your cleaned up version along with the one I have up on the site now. I will test both.

Thanks again.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

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Skip, I fixed your member card image. It will go on a white background now and look a bit cleaner than what you have. I think you can just right click and save it from here.

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Old September 17, 2012, 05:32 PM
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Hi Skip,

just noticed that a section of your page isn't aligned left, not sure if it's intentional. I've added a jpeg to show where. I'd also like to know when you go live with this.

Thanks,

Paul.
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