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Old September 20, 2012, 06:21 AM
-TW
 
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Default Please critique this short video...

What I am most wondering about is the PACE. I was going after confident + deliberate, but I hope I didn't swerve into sleepy.

Also critique whatever other aspects you see fit to.

http://youtu.be/G25NxQczk44

Thanks!

-- TW
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Old September 20, 2012, 08:55 AM
Bozo
 
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Default Re: Please critique this short video...

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Originally Posted by -TW View Post
What I am most wondering about is the PACE. I was going after confident + deliberate, but I hope I didn't swerve into sleepy.

Also critique whatever other aspects you see fit to.

http://youtu.be/G25NxQczk44

Thanks!

-- TW

It's 4 times as long as needed. At the 1:24 mark, I clicked away as you were saying how efficient you are, and I could see at least another minute to go.

Some minutes later I remember something about green but I have no idea what it is you want to say about green.

I liked your dying on the beach video better. It was a real video instead of a guy reading to me from the screen.
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Old September 20, 2012, 11:44 AM
Fishman
 
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Default Re: Please critique this short video...

TW, Not sure if you have read it, but a great book to read- How To Get Your Point Across in 30 Seconds or Less by Milo O. Frank. Also, I would take out the third "thousands" in your talk. It seems redundant and almost like you had to put out the extra effort to say it. Hope this helps. Otherwise it wasn't bad but I had a hard time understanding what benefit I would get for sending you an email.

Fred
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Old September 20, 2012, 01:52 PM
Phil
 
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Default Re: Please critique this short video... TW, JV's with [Smart] FIVERR connection!

No disrespect to Anyone here... No matter the Sex we are...

Used correctly and Professional with Good Taste(s) & A Few other {Smart} Components...

As the [Good ol' Saying] Goes... Sex Sells! ...

TW's definitely Got a Winning $$$$ making Radio voice...

Ideas! Ideas! Galore... Use [IT]... or Lose it as they Say!

Consider re-working your Overall marketing Campaign with...

A Female related connection as in my 1st Quick example, Next, next...

The 6th [Tip] Options of Creating Awesome Corporate Videos! ...
http://www.waspbarcode.com/buzz/5-ti...porate-videos/
https://www.google.com/search?q=five...ient=firefox-a

Phil
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