Glenn
April 5, 2010, 07:53 PM
Hi,
Thanks for the networking.
Thought I'd share this 30% Response sales letter.
My client is a doctor and a consultant. He mailed out 10 letters to local business owners. 3 Called and paid him 3 grand each.
30% response.
And his letter?
3 or 4 sentences!
I thought it unusual enough to share here with the group.
Glenn Osborn
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TESTIMONIAL -
After reading your Ugly Copywriting BOOK, I wrote the following direct mail. I sent it to only 10 people and got 3 clients.
RESTRICTED NEWS
I help people spend half the time, making four times the money; and my fee is $3000.00.
I am limiting this offer to the first 3 people who call, because I want to protect the system.
That means that you know that it's very important to call me now for an appointment.
Call Dr. Kay Weaver(Ed.D., Ph.D.)
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EDITOR'S NOTE - Many think long copy beats short copy ALL the time. Maybe not.
More info...
http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=79
Thanks for the networking.
Thought I'd share this 30% Response sales letter.
My client is a doctor and a consultant. He mailed out 10 letters to local business owners. 3 Called and paid him 3 grand each.
30% response.
And his letter?
3 or 4 sentences!
I thought it unusual enough to share here with the group.
Glenn Osborn
====================
TESTIMONIAL -
After reading your Ugly Copywriting BOOK, I wrote the following direct mail. I sent it to only 10 people and got 3 clients.
RESTRICTED NEWS
I help people spend half the time, making four times the money; and my fee is $3000.00.
I am limiting this offer to the first 3 people who call, because I want to protect the system.
That means that you know that it's very important to call me now for an appointment.
Call Dr. Kay Weaver(Ed.D., Ph.D.)
======================
======================
EDITOR'S NOTE - Many think long copy beats short copy ALL the time. Maybe not.
More info...
http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=79