Robert J.
September 15, 2012, 10:21 PM
Skip,
A couple thoughts from the peanut gallery ...
1) Profits, yes ... but they are "month after month after month" profits
I would see this major benefit in the headline, or at least the sub-head.
2) You mention "I found a way to make membership sites with no website."
Is this correct? Isn't your method based on having membership websites? Maybe I am missing something, and if so, I apologize!
3) "Most people don't know how to search the internet."
I would add "efficiently" search the internet. Almost everyone knows how to "use" google, but they don't know how to efficiently (and effectively) "get" to the information they are looking for.
I think I would add one word: "Most people done know how to efficiently search the internet."
Also, I think I would try to get the word "effectively" into the copy somewhere, too.
Frankly, I guess the damn sales copy is pretty good, because I'm ready to hit the freakin' "buy now" button already.
A couple thoughts from the peanut gallery ...
1) Profits, yes ... but they are "month after month after month" profits
I would see this major benefit in the headline, or at least the sub-head.
2) You mention "I found a way to make membership sites with no website."
Is this correct? Isn't your method based on having membership websites? Maybe I am missing something, and if so, I apologize!
3) "Most people don't know how to search the internet."
I would add "efficiently" search the internet. Almost everyone knows how to "use" google, but they don't know how to efficiently (and effectively) "get" to the information they are looking for.
I think I would add one word: "Most people done know how to efficiently search the internet."
Also, I think I would try to get the word "effectively" into the copy somewhere, too.
Frankly, I guess the damn sales copy is pretty good, because I'm ready to hit the freakin' "buy now" button already.
