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-TW
April 8, 2010, 02:39 AM
1)...
Is the slow economy hammering your business?
Are you on a tight budget?
Do you need more customers?


2)...
"Even though your product or service is EXCELLENT... If you don't have enough CUSTOMERS, you don't have a business!"

3)...
"FREE 30-minute meeting in your office shows you how to GET MORE CUSTOMERS -- GUARANTEED!"

4)...
“HELP! I need more customers -- but my advertising ‘budget’ is $0.00.”
(((Then, 'Does that sound like you? -- etc.)))


5)...
“Yes, I will show you how to GET MORE CUSTOMERS -- even if your advertising ‘budget’ is $0.00.”

6)...
“[Local town] man shows you how to GET MORE CUSTOMERS -- even if your advertising ‘budget’ is $0.00.”

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I'd love to hear your thoughts + suggestions on these headlines. Thanks!!

-- TW


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