View Single Post
  #3  
Old March 17, 2001, 09:26 AM
Dien Rice
 
Posts: n/a
Default Re: Press Release Ideas

Hi Garth,

I'm not an expert in press releases, but I'm happy to add my comments.... :)

> Florida Man Finds Out You Don’t Need Water
> To Wash And Wax Your Car

> “ You know some surveys have shown that
> people can lose an average of $3000 dollars
> in resale value without an well maintained
> vehicle, ” says Garth Gibson

When I read this, I immediately thought, "Who's Garth Gibson?" (That's if I didn't know you....) So you might say, "Garth Gibson, owner of ...." (or whatever, fill in the gap)....

I thought your press release sounds good and like it's an interesting product.... :)

- Dien