Re: Press Release Ideas
Hi Garth,
I'm not an expert in press releases, but I'm happy to add my comments.... :)
> Florida Man Finds Out You Don’t Need Water
> To Wash And Wax Your Car
> “ You know some surveys have shown that
> people can lose an average of $3000 dollars
> in resale value without an well maintained
> vehicle, ” says Garth Gibson
When I read this, I immediately thought, "Who's Garth Gibson?" (That's if I didn't know you....) So you might say, "Garth Gibson, owner of ...." (or whatever, fill in the gap)....
I thought your press release sounds good and like it's an interesting product.... :)
- Dien
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