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![]() Hi Garth,
I'm not an expert in press releases, but I'm happy to add my comments.... :) > Florida Man Finds Out You Don’t Need Water > To Wash And Wax Your Car > “ You know some surveys have shown that > people can lose an average of $3000 dollars > in resale value without an well maintained > vehicle, ” says Garth Gibson When I read this, I immediately thought, "Who's Garth Gibson?" (That's if I didn't know you....) So you might say, "Garth Gibson, owner of ...." (or whatever, fill in the gap).... I thought your press release sounds good and like it's an interesting product.... :) - Dien |
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