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Old September 15, 2012, 04:57 PM
Skip Rosell
 
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Default Re: Skip, it is fine, just make it a little bit easier to read.

Gordon, thank you so much for your comments.

I have not done any formatting per se on the sales letter yet. I will use your suggestions to make it easy to read.

When I have the full report done I will send you a copy so you can jump on board. It is as easy and simple as I say. In fact when you start doing this in a niche that is of interest to you it is also fun. You will be targeting websites that you enjoy and it is fun to just surf on a subject you like.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

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Originally Posted by GordonJ View Post
My advice for what it is worth is

Break the copy up. I'd be inclined to put the Money up front, something like How to Make $500.00 a Month Extra Income in Less than Four Hours.

Yes, you can make 125 dollars an hour by offering a membership site.

But, there is nothing wrong with what you have, I might suggest using the TWO steps, breaking it up a little bit with bullet points, and maybe use two columns in a frame for the example of searches.

Otherwise, it is fine. You could easily make sales the way it is, depends on who you are going to offer it to.

Heck, I might even start a couple of these membership sites, you make it sound so simple...IF only I knew anything about anything...dang it.

Gordon
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