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![]() My advice for what it is worth is
Break the copy up. I'd be inclined to put the Money up front, something like How to Make $500.00 a Month Extra Income in Less than Four Hours. Yes, you can make 125 dollars an hour by offering a membership site. But, there is nothing wrong with what you have, I might suggest using the TWO steps, breaking it up a little bit with bullet points, and maybe use two columns in a frame for the example of searches. Otherwise, it is fine. You could easily make sales the way it is, depends on who you are going to offer it to. Heck, I might even start a couple of these membership sites, you make it sound so simple...IF only I knew anything about anything...dang it. Gordon Quote:
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