Please check out my eBook!!! I need some feedback...

Hello,
I have this problem. I am selling the same course via eBay with decent
results. Now from my website I have a free download (eBook) to induce web-based sales (not to depend on eBay too much).
After 600 downloads, no sale. I admit I raised my price from eBay and have no bonuses or guarantees)
Someone also complained that the eBook would not run on XP. Could some of you
kind visitors check my eBook out and let me know?
Is anything wrong with it? Can you run it at all? What is the general impression thatyou get when read it? Any ideas, please don't be gentle.
Cheers
Andras




Free eBook (click on the CD image to download)

Hi Andras,

I run Windows XP and was able to download and run your book with no problems at all.

I would say, however, that it is very hard to read. The head shaking man on the first page is very distracting, as is the yellow banner that keeps popping up and covering up whatever text you are reading.

Also, you seem to launch into your subject somewhere in the middle - there is no real introduction and you make the assumption that everyone knows exactly what you are talking about.

I'm potentially very interested in trading, but you lost me on page one.

Martin


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