E-book Critique requested

Hello everyone,

I've been working on a project and I would like some input as to what changes could and should be made. It's designed to help people who are faced with having to give a public presentation but have never done it before.

It's not in the final stages as of yet, but I would like to hear what you've got to say. I also haven't done up the website yet.

You can get a copy of it from the link below this message.

I'm looking forward to your replies on how to make this a better product.

Shawn Farley




Download and review 'Beginners Guide to Public Speaking'

Clicking the link gave me a page that said it doesn't exist. Where is it?

Debra

> Hello everyone,

> I've been working on a project and I would
> like some input as to what changes could and
> should be made. It's designed to help people
> who are faced with having to give a public
> presentation but have never done it before.

> It's not in the final stages as of yet, but
> I would like to hear what you've got to say.
> I also haven't done up the website yet.

> You can get a copy of it from the link below
> this message.

> I'm looking forward to your replies on how
> to make this a better product.

> Shawn Farley




New Freedom Marketing

I had the same problem but when i looked at the link I noticed a period after speak - changed it to a / and got the page.

Now I'm off to read it,

Tam

> Clicking the link gave me a page that said
> it doesn't exist. Where is it?

> Debra




try this one

Thanks Tam!

Now I'm off too ;-)

Debra

> I had the same problem but when i looked at
> the link I noticed a period after speak -
> changed it to a / and got the page.

> Now I'm off to read it,

> Tam




New Freedom Marketing

Shawn first I would like to say thank you for the opportunity to review your
"Beginners Guide To Public Speaking"

I have had this fear my whole life. (I am 50 and have never gotten past it)

Wish I had your great product years ago.

I only have two things to report that you need to change.

1. You graphic at the beginning of your ebook. I
is fuzzy and hard to read because of the shadow.
If you decreased the amount of shadow slightly
it would improve it. And if you were to put a
little space between the letters it would be
easier to read.

2. Page 17, second paragraph, the word "bit" is incorrect, you have bt.

I read every word and loved every aspect of your ebook Shawn.

I will read it numerous times until I basically have it memorized.

You content and structure is in my humble
opinion great and easy to understand and follow.

If I were to change anything I would change the
font size to one size smaller. I found it a
little big and I have poor vision so I usually
like larger fonts but that was a tad too large.

But great otherwise.

I learned more in the hour or so I took to read it than in all my 50 years from others. Again Thank you Shawn.




Starting With A Marketing Plan

I enjoyed reading the book and learned quite a bit. Though I've never had the 'opportunity' to do any public speaking, per se, there is always a first time. Your book is concise and clear and gives excellent advice to nervous speakers. If I ever found myself in the position of giving a speech or presentation, I would definitely refer to your book and recommend it to others.

Debra

P.S. You may use my tesitmonial if you like, Shawn


New Freedom Marketing