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![]() You wanna know why? because I'm tired.
Same old headlines, same old stuff. I'm sure there are gizillions of people lined up waiting for this stuff. But I'm not. I'm done... Tell me something I don't know... Give me headline that grabs an OLD WORN OUT persons attention. Ya know there are plenty of us out here.... I would call it "How to make a living when you are old, tired, frustrated and broke.." hotsheet. AND remember this: empathy AND sympathy play a MAJOR part in your writings.... Not every business is right for every person. BUT if you determine 'where' the mind of your reader is, you might be on the right track. AND if your headlines convey that message then more power to ya. later.. Pappy |
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![]() Pappy,
I love your headline. I'd change it slightly: "A simple, proven way to make $5K a month when you are old, tired, frustrated, and broke." I do not want a 15-video training. I want a single video that lasts 1 minute, 58 seconds, and covers everything. Maybe that's because I'm old and tired? Richard Dennis |
#13
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![]() Thanks Pappy,
Yours is a valid Vote. As I said, 19 ideas of 20 FAIL when you're testing. IF YOU Are Feeling Old and Tired, however. Here are 3 Best Selling E-books Already Tested and SO FANTASTIC we give a 365 day 100% munny back Guarantee on. **************************************** I - How to Knock Out Stress in 30 Seconds or Less http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=87 **************************************** II - A 5000 Yr Old Extra Energy Exercise Taught me by a World Famous Surgeon http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=80 **************************************** III - How to Smooth Pain From The Body with Your Hands (OR Shoot Chi Energy at people) http://archive.enchantednlp.com/products.php?id=74 Thanks, Glenn P.S. - While I'm waiting to get a few more votes - OR Perhaps TEST Totally Different Book Ideas. You can - at least - Check out what 3 Tested WINNING Headlines and sales letters look like. Each letter grossed 1000's on Ebay. |
#14
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![]() Glenn ...
It has to be "A" since marketing is the key to success in any business. Jim |
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![]() Really like this one:
"What I Learned From a Street BUM Who Just Bought His Own House with CASH." Millard |
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![]() Thanks Dien,
FAILURE is GOOD. Fast Failure is better. I noticed 8 of 11 of the Votes for the 1st Five Books are my VIP Ezine Folks. So. SOB WIMPER MOAN (Glenn wipes away a tear.) TEST #1 at Sowpub FAILED. I know cuz Nobody Voted. EPIC FAIL - Sort of. Not enough votes to be SURE. But the "BUM Book" is a Maybe. We need more Fast Failures. So. Thinking Quickly. We decided to Offer a HUGE BRIBE for more Opinions. To My List. I Added a 9 Chapter - BRIBE FOR YOUR OPINION - and sent it out to my Customer List who LUV The Quality of my ADDED VALUE BRIBES. HERE'S What THE AUDIO Chapter BRIBE Looks Like: ********************************************* ONE - The 9 Chapter BONUS BRIBE List HEADLINE - “How Steve Jobs Set Himself Up to Starve or Freeze If He Didn’t Hypnotize 2 or 3 Coeds a Day - Book #1” SUB-HEAD - "How Steve's College GirlFriend Watched Him Test NLP Selling Strategies w/100's of Coeds" ----------------------------- TABLE OF CONTENTS INTRODUCTION - A Chat w/A Billionaires College GirlFriend CHAPTER #1 - DIRECTIONS on How to Adjust Your Thinking About The (International Criminal Olga Story.) CHAPTER #2 - Sugar-Packet-Elevator Hug FLIRT CASE STUDY - Russian Cosmetics SalesWoman I Met At Nordstroms. CHAPTER #3 - Olga WORE OUT Her Sugar Packet In Twelve Hours! CHAPTER #4 - How Steve Jobs Used Sugar Packet Anchors to Get Free Meals from Coeds. (PART I) CHAPTER #5 - How Steve Jobs Used Sugar Packet Anchors to Get Free Meals from Coeds. (PART II) CHAPTER #6 -Olga Veggie Restaurant CASE STUDY - Olga Calls and Asks for Advice. She Says She is part owner of a Vegetarian Restaurant. CHAPTER #7 - Cosmetics CASE STUDY - Olga Now Asks For Help Boosting Her Cosmetics Sales to Affluent Women. (She Reports Fantastic Results in boosting tips.) CHAPTER #8 - I Visit Nordstroms. The Manager Tells me Olga is #1 in Perfume and Cosmetics Sales. CHAPTER #9 - Dates for Daughter CASE STUDY - Olga Calls for Help Getting Her Daughter (Chaperoned) Dates With Rich Men At Veggie Restaurant. ================== ================== ================== TWO - The 3 Book Ideas You VOTE on: A - What I Learned from 400 Mil lion Mentor Jim Straw About How to Choose Munny Making Ideas Where No S elling is Needed (20 Case Studies) B - What I Learned From A Street BUM Who Bought His House for C ash C - How to 2X - 3X - 5X Then 10X Your Sales OVER-NITE w/The Best Idea I Ever Discovered After 23 Years of Interviewing 100’s of Self Made Millionaires ********************************************* ********************************************* We ALREADY Have Dozens of Votes. Letter A and C are Neck and neck. B is last. Thanks, Glenn Osborn P.S. - VIP's Who've already made munny with my other E-books LUV To tell Us what They Want us to Create NEXT. ********************************************** ********************************************** Here's a PHOTO of the 9 FREE Audio Chapters at the Archive.Enchantednlp.com https://img.skitch.com/20120719-mx9e...jirypsnec2.jpg |
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![]() Out of those three choices, my winner is:
C - How to 2X - 3X - 5X Then 10X Your Sales OVER-NITE w/The Best Idea I Ever Discovered After 23 Years of Interviewing 100’s of Self Made Millionaires |
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![]() Thanks STD,
Your Headline Choice is in the lead - so far in the voting. Good for you! Glenn Osborn ----------- Your THANK YOU REWARD or Info BRIBE... Visit - www.Archive.enchantednlp.com And look for THESE 9 STEVE JOBS Audio Chapter Links 8 inches down the middle of the page. https://img.skitch.com/20120719-mx9e...jirypsnec2.jpg Glenn |
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![]() Of the last three options ... they all interest me (not to the tune of $99 each, but they do interest me!).
Forced to pick one, I'd go with C ... only because the source is interviews with millionaires ... while the other two options source only one person each ... JM Straw and the BUM. JM is amazing, though I wish there was a way to unsub from his mailing list. I'm on multiple times and get duplicates! But I guess my pick is for a team of millionaires over one marketing genius. |
#20
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![]() Thanks Robert,
You were able to LISTEN to the 9 AudioChapter BRIBE at my Archive - right? Glenn |
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