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CHAPTER #7 - Apartment Manager Memorizes 250 Employee Names
CHAPTER #7 - How an Apartment Manager Memorized 250 Temp
Employee Names with One Handshake Intro Each Here's the Case Study: Please notice that depending on what usage you plan for some Case Studies/Testimonials By changing the Title you can shift the emphasis around. In This Case We're focusing around Wgt Loss using Mother Natures nutrition. ------------------------------- ------------------------------- "I Ate Like a Horse But Still Pulled My Belt In a Notch" Dear Glenn, On my second day at a new job as Apartment Manager my boss handed me a clipboard. Pointed to a huge truck outside. Said, "You're just in time. We bought all new furniture for 400 apartments so I called The ManPower Temp Agency and they're sending a few 100 manual laborers over to help you install it." I never had that good a memory before. But somehow I memorized everybodies name. The Super Sprouts, Spectrabiotic digestive Algae and the Omega mineral algae were like magic. Funny. I didn't realize anything was different. But the big boss showed up during a morning meeting with the men. And I went around the room and reeled off the names like clockwork. Everybody was looking at me. "How did you DO that?" So Thanks for making me look good. I just got a glowing EVAL Report and a Raise. A funny thing. Even though I wasn't used to heavy labor. And was older and heavier than many of the TEMP guys. I was able to keep going until 5pm every day. 7 am to 5pm is a long day. I was both helping unpack. Lift beds and living room and dining furniture off trucks for two weeks. But I was able to keep track of what went where. And Inspite of eating like a horse I pulled my belt in a notch. Very nice. Alan Baer Baltimore, MD ----------------------- ----------------------- ACTION SUMMARY - Ok. As you see the above is a story based Testimonial. It talks about Before and After. Explains several Benefits: A - Better memory B - Looking good to the boss C - Great Evaluation at work and a raise D - More stamina and No-Thinking-Wgt Loss What You Can't see is the way I wrote the Headline for the Testimonial. I read thru it. Then lifted Alan's Words from the end of his story. Stuck it up top. Often when I'm writing something I'll start with a working Title. FIRST DRAFT. Then find a better Headline Buried in the Copy. You should do this too. OK... Up next. CHAPTER #8 - |
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