Would appreciate some reviews on my new site design please

Cornell kept his promise and designed a new website for me and I totally love it.

He also helped me improve the sales copy.

The domain name will be different since Money Balloons is taken

http://www.bizshowcase.com/samir/index.html

I would really appreciate some comments on the design and sales copy.

Thank you!
-Samir

[Ankesh]

Dan Kennedy found that ugly designs work better in conversion rates. But that was direct mail. Not internet.

I tell this to make a point.

The only way to know which design / copy is better - is by split testing.

(My personal opinion is - your old salesletter will out pull your new salesletter.)

Hi Samir,

Personally... Due to the Simplicity of Earn $300 A Day Distributing Balloons...

There are really Multiple ways of Writing-up the Sales Page, Storyline, Review Styling, FAQ's, with a few misc. Spins/Tie-ins along the way...

As Ankesh suggested... Split Testing is a Worthwhile exercise... Always be on the Lookout for "Fresh" innovative Marketing ideas...

I'd have to Pick a Blend of your (3) Existing Landing pages... (2) Here on SowPubs...

Ask Google about #3... With the $37. Price Tag! ...

Ongoing Testing can Definitely Help on the ROI planning and business model(s) in the Long Term...

If increasing Profits, Revenues and Expanding on misc. Related business models into the Future is of interest to you! ... Brainstorming examples are in your original thread...
http://www.sowpub.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28258

By the way, regarding the following phrase, Each of your Landing pages suggests This business is Not for you if you live in a rural town...

''Please know that if you live in a rural town, this business is not for you unless you have a metro/urban/suburban location near you.''

I can Tell you Lots of “Smart” Entrepreneurial (types) live in Rural towns... “Think” out-of-the-box And Run Thriving businesses with Network connections throughout Larger Cities...

Your particular business for those living in Small Towns just require (Your Additional Guide) Outsourcing! ... How to Do it from a Distance... Earn $300 A Day Distributing Balloons...

Once again, Dealership related Ballooning (type) Concept(s) etc...

Could be Set-up in Various ways Using Customized methods... Contracting Students... The Unemployed etc. etc...

Google is Already showing a couple Outsourcing! ...

Ballooning opportunities... Based on your Ballooning idea...

How to Do it from a Distance... With their Own little Spin on Things... I'm sure...

Don't forget to Add-in that Affiliate program Once you Expand the product... including Multiple Format(s)... Video course with Coaching, Consulting etc. etc...

With a nice Higher Price Tag! ... Of course...

Just some Quick thoughts and ideas for you...

All the best...

Phil

Thank you guys. I'll definitely try the spilt testing route.

Phil, you mentioned that Google is already showing a couple outsourcing the balloon opportunity. Could you please point me to the source of this information?

Thank you
-Samir

Samir,

I know the misc. Ads throughout Craigslists are probably yourself, maybe some JV's...

Earn $300 A Day Distributing Balloons (NY / NJ)
http://newjersey.craigslist.org/biz/2317555429.html

The Outsourcing option is “Definitely” Doable with just about Any business model/Concept! ...

As per my comments in Many other threads...

But! ... Now that I re-looked at my Quick Digging into Google...

It Looks more Like someone is Re-Selling your Idea...

Unless it's Yourself going Under Pen names... Or other Marketers you've given the Rights to...

Is Earn $300 A Day Distributing Balloons available with Re-Seller and Full PRL private label rights?? ...

Please Let me know...

Unfortunately! ... With the Good ol' internet...

Once those misc. Golden nuggets are released...

Dishonesty in misc. forms takes over...

Although, it's Difficult, pretty much impossible to Protect business ideas through info related products, except for Copyright protection issues which is another story and a Big problem online...

Here's the Growing list... Just like All the Fiverr related web Concepts are being copied, re-worked into New ideas too...
http://www.fiverrs.net/jobs-187.html
http://www.jobsfor10.com/user/Nature...uting-balloons
http://www.fiverr.com/users/naturega...uting-balloons
http://www.fiverrs.net/Show-You-How-to-Earn-$300-A-Day-Distributing-Balloons-188.html
http://www.fiverrs.net/Show-You-How-to-Earn-$300-A-Day-Distributing-Balloons-187.html
(some aren't linking, just do a copy and paste)

All the best

Phil

Hi Phil….those are actually all my ads. NatureGal is a close friend of mine who has been helping me promote my ebook. Of all the ads you found, only the craigslist ad has gotten us some orders. I have two ads on craigslist, the second one is http://newjersey.craigslist.org/bfs/2327962598.html and it has performed better than the first one but it's good to know that these ads have increased my ranking on Google.

I am very much interested in the outsourcing option. I tried sub-contracting but it didn't work out too well. I am willing to give it a try again and would love to hear your thoughts on how I can make it happen. Please PM me your email address so I can send you a copy of my ebook.

Thanks
-Samir

Samir,

Great to hear that All the Ads belong to you! ...

Nice to See that ''Only'' Honest entrepreneurial members are investing...

PM just sent with some Quick food for thought...

Outsourcing/Partnership programs...

Who Knows...

Maybe ''easily doable investments'' in the very Near Future...

Phil