Sandi Bowman
September 11, 2008, 07:02 PM
Not bad, Jason but a couple of minor points:
1. The name of the company is difficult to read...it's blurry (kinda) on the left where the font seems to be squeezed or something. You might consider lightening the shadows to define the text or change the font to something more defined.
2. Dawn's picture. She's obviously an attractive person but that picture does not do her justice. She needs to smile openly (it is better for appearing approachable) and have better lighting as it is much too dark and loses a lot of definition.
Wish you all the best!
Sandi Bowman
1. The name of the company is difficult to read...it's blurry (kinda) on the left where the font seems to be squeezed or something. You might consider lightening the shadows to define the text or change the font to something more defined.
2. Dawn's picture. She's obviously an attractive person but that picture does not do her justice. She needs to smile openly (it is better for appearing approachable) and have better lighting as it is much too dark and loses a lot of definition.
Wish you all the best!
Sandi Bowman
