Constructive Criticism for My Flyer

Originally Posted by Jason Hatchett

I would like to get some constructive criticism about the flyer were going to use and help finding our USP. Here’s the flyer.
http://hstrial-jhatchett.homestead.c...ouchflyer.html

Thank You for Your Input,
Jason Hatchett
http://www.GuaranteedReferrals.com

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