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Skip, it is fine, just make it a little bit easier to read.
My advice for what it is worth is
Break the copy up. I'd be inclined to put the Money up front, something like How to Make $500.00 a Month Extra Income in Less than Four Hours. Yes, you can make 125 dollars an hour by offering a membership site. But, there is nothing wrong with what you have, I might suggest using the TWO steps, breaking it up a little bit with bullet points, and maybe use two columns in a frame for the example of searches. Otherwise, it is fine. You could easily make sales the way it is, depends on who you are going to offer it to. Heck, I might even start a couple of these membership sites, you make it sound so simple...IF only I knew anything about anything...dang it. Gordon Quote:
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