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Old January 15, 2007, 11:54 PM
Jason
 
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Default Re: Constructive Criticism for My Flyer

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Originally Posted by SteveSki View Post
Hi Jason, Congratulations on your well deserved success!
You and your wife are both real doers. As you know good
ideas are a dime a dozen but the man or women who acts
on them is priceless!

I too would test different headlines until I maximized results.

A quick suggestion....

MAKE YOUR CAR LOOK BRAND NEW!
We Remove Dents, Dings, Scratches & Repair
Windscreen Chips and Cracks!

TODAY ONLY - FREE DEMO ON YOUR CAR FOR THE FIRST 3 CALLERS

Maybe also incorporate Don's Idea of using a Voice Mail Box with a 24 Hour Recorded Message and a Free Report!

Cheers,
Steve Shulenski
www.MoneyMakingPhotography.com

That would be great Steve except that he is looking for more dealer accounts.

The idea of using the voice box is a good bit, however in a competitive (buyers) market, you don't want them to have to jump through more hoops than they need to.
When I was detailing vehicles, I would just goto the dealer and offer my service.
The key was offer something that the others did not, which varied from simply beng punctual to also cleaning their restrooms ( another service that I ran at the time.

Jason it seems that you have other services to offer the dealership.
I really would simply send them a card with a date and time that YOU WILL BE THERE and then be there.
Simply being there on time would win you many accounts if you were in my area.
Jason
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