Please critique this E-mail copy.

Dear...

Thank you for your recent purchase of...through....

This email is just to verify that everything is to your satisfaction with the product and purchase process.

To make sure you don't miss out on any of our other great specials be sure to sign up for our newslist which is sent approximately every 3 weeks. Just click here:

We're looking forward to a long, and mutually rewarding, relationship with you. Thank you for your confidence in us.

Sincerely,

Hope this is what you had in mind, Igor.
Sandi

> Hello guy's.
> I need to improve the following confirmation
> e-mail that will be sent out after 5-6 days
> of the customer purchase from a computer
> reselling company like PCMALL.com, cdw.com

> Please help me improve it. My main concern
> is the text.

> Thank you.

>
> -------------------------------------START---------------
> Hello (name)

> Thank you for your recent order with
> (company name)

> I wanted to check with you that you are
> pleased with your purchase and that your
> item was received.

> We at (Company name) hope you enjoy your
> purchase.

> Hope to see you soon as we value you as our
> customer.

> Make sure you sign up to our newslist to
> receive special deals every 3 weeks.
> You can sign up to the list here (URL
> address).

> Thank you.
> (company name)
> (Address)
> (URL)




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