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Dear ____________

We wanted to just drop you a line to thank you for your recent purchase from (company name).

By now we hope that you have received your new KB124 computer, and hopefully you are even reading this email on it.

If this is your first computer purchase, things can be very overwhelming, so feel free to contact us at 1-800-GET-HELP, or email us at support@xyzcomputers.

If your purchase was an upgrade from an older system, we feel you know by now that you made a wise choice in the system you chose.

We offer a number of other computer products to enhance your information experience, and in appreciation for your business, please use the following special code ZZZ123 to save an additional 10% on training CD's, mousepads, print cartridges, toner, and a number of other items especially chosen for our valued customers. Click here for more information.

We also offer a (weekly, monthly) Tech Tips newsletter absolutely free, and all you have to do is click here to sign up.

Thanks Again,
Joe Willy
XYZ Computers




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