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Re: Another Flyer Critique
Hi Jason,
You have an interesting product that will do well. If it were my product, I would want to tell the entire story in the first 5 seconds - which you can do with your product.. Your flyer has all the right components that just need to be switched a little. I would change the headline to: "Watch scratches vanish is seconds! Then, have your before and after photos immediately under that one headline. Remove the words "before" and "after" and replace with: (photo on left) "Wipe it on" - in white text (photo on right) "10 seconds later" - also in white text Then the rest of the top text and balance of flyer copy under those photos. Otherwise, it's a good flyer - in my opinion. Lawrence |
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