Bullet point critique, please...

[Ankesh]

Thanks TW for asking.

My opinion is: all of your bullet points speak to other marketers. Not other small biz owners.

If I had to select one of the bullet points for small biz owners - it would be:
Instant 16-point "Marketing Self-Diagnosis"

Better headlines:

Local Marketing Guru Shows You How To Make Money Faster Inspite Of Sluggish Economy -- All At A $37 Workshop!

(This was by Brian Keith Voiles.)

"The Secret To Getting More Business Referals in Houston, TX"
"Discover How To Get All The Business Referrals You Can Handle in Houston, TX From One of the Nations Foremost Referral Marketing Experts in This 2 Hour Free Local Seminar"

(This one was by David Frey)

(If you want the entire ads - send me an email and I'll send them to you - I have them in pdf files.)