Please critique (+ vote on) my headlines -- Thanks!...

[Glenn]

Dear TW,

Thanks for giving us more info.

I agree with Gordon. Forget the headlines.

I've consulted with several guys who sell advertising on Pizza Boxes.

The 1st Guy in New York - Basically bribed managers and gave kickbacks.
The owner never knew. You probly don't want to imitate him. (I tried to
help him use Legit ideas)

Guy #2 - Was part owner of a Georgia radio station. So he used unsold
space to pitch his Pizza Box Advertising. (Not a good fit for you, either)

Guy #3 - You might like, however. He's in Vermont.

A - He made a list of all the retail owners in a zip code.
B - Called on the phone to check the owner/manager was there. (Heh, heh -
he had a trick question that got him the TRUTH. Tricky to splain here.)
C - Walked in the door with a Pizza Box full of ADS - EXCEPT a Deli.

The pitch was - "Are YOU going to advertise here. Or are you going to let
one of your Deli owning competitors (He showed them the list) get all this
business? - 10,000 pizza boxes go out every week.

Try that.

Forget the Headlines.

Thanks,
Glenn Osborn

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