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![]() Thank you for taking time to write back.
Skip, I definitely have a lot to learn. The total number of visitors I received from all three campaigns were 283. I am not even sure if the problem is with my sales copy or the ad because on Facebook, my ads received 187,924 impressions but only 68 clicks. I used two different ads, one said "Earn $300 A day distributing balloons to local businesses" and the other said "Earn extra cash distributing balloons to local businesses" I believe most of my orders came from Google AdWords where my CPC was $0.80. I used hundreds of keywords but only "extra cash" and "earn extra money" performed. I would like to capture emails but I do not have anything else to offer and I don't think it would be right to offer a badly written PLR as gift to people who subscribe. Plus, without paid advertisement, how do I get people to visit my site to begin with? Phil, you're right, a $10 price tag is not going to replace a $300 a day business but the idea is so simple, I am not sure how to twist it into another business model. It doesn't really have any secret formula that I can keep to myself or maybe I am just not smart enough to think of one. The basic premise is that if you make something easier for someone, you will be rewarded. Think about it, why is Apple one of the most successful companies in the world? MP3 players existed before Apple introduced the iPod and smart phones existed before the iPhone was introduced. So what did Apple do different? Well, with the iPod, they made it easy to download music into an MP3 player. With the iPhone, they made it easy to navigate using the touch screen. Convenience stores are another example. They make it easy to buy everyday items, that's why they're so successful and that's why you find one on every corner. People pay for convenience and people pay for ease. My balloon distribution business makes it easy for people to buy a certain type of balloon and it also makes it easy for certain businesses to sell them. I would love to get some feedback on the sales copy. My website is easilydoable dot com. This forum does not let me post links. Thanks -Samir |
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I think that's an anti-spam thing (so it's harder for spammers to post tons of links)... I think you can post links once you have 5 posts... Anyway, if anyone else wants a link that's "easy to click" to see his website, Samir's website is at www.easilydoable.com Best wishes! Dien |
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![]() Thanks Dien!
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![]() Hi Samir,
I bought your report just now and will review it over the weekend when I have some extra time. I have some ideas for your saleletter and will do some research on the best keywords to target. I will also research the right places to do some free advertising for your report. I have a couple of deadlines to meet so I will not get to it until the weekend. If you have some questions that you want me to answer you can drop me a line at [email protected] Best of success, Skip Rosell |
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![]() Thank you so much Skip. I appreciate all your help.
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![]() That was me from my friend Sharif's netbook. I didn't realize he was logged on.
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![]() Hi
samir i feel so sad to hear about your accident.it is glad to know that you are starting for new business ,it is good that you dont give up after your accident.i appreciate your figthing spirit.all the best. Last edited by Dien Rice : April 25, 2011 at 03:19 AM. |
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![]() Hi Samir,
First CONGRATULATIONS on: 1. Asking for help. You have already received excellent feedback from the rest of the group. 2. Putting something up and marketing it. 11 sales from 283 clicks = 3.8% conversion from "Cold PPC" traffic??? That's seems higher than I would have guessed. So Congratulatons I noticed that you are: 1. Asking for feedback about the Sales Copy and that 2. NOT building a List for FEAR of offering a crappy PLR product and or NOT having anything else to sell?? These Questions you are asking all stem from ONE THING. And NO it is not lack of your knowledge per se. It is THE most important link in the sales chain. A Lack of CLARITY on WHO your TARGET is. SAMIR repeat this 10x's before you go to bed lol "Your TARGETS will dictate your COPY which will dictate the OFFER ." Repeat. "TARGETS dictate COPY dictates OFFER" See A LOT of the Answers to the Sales Copy question and "How do I Improve this?" type questions will NOT be found with us... but they WILL be Found In those 11 People that actually BOUGHT from you. They are buyers. GO BACK to them. GET to know them Better. YOUR SOLUTION to your questions are IN THE TARGETS So do this... 1. GET EXTREMELY CLEAR ON WHO YOUR TARGET IS and The marketplace
Once you are Clear your Salesletter could write itself by offering a Soluton to the Problems/Desires you established by your market research aka. GET CLEAR ON WHO YOUR TARGET is. Action: 1. You could have that paypal button redirect to a Surveymonkey.com survey Lettng them know the report is not ready yet...but that you want to tailor it to their needs. Ask them What's the MOST IMPORTANT question you have about____________? Build a list and then update the report or ADD TO the existing report a FAQ and YES bump up the price. but THAT will come later. GET CLEAR ON YOUR TARGET P.S If you are NOT building a list because of Fear of NOT knowing what to sell next. You are not building a business. You just have ONE product. START BUILDING A LIST NOW! Like RIGHT NOW ...Please. If you don't You gotta go back and INVEST more BUX in PPC every single month. "Hoping to tweak your metrics to profitability. P.P.S I think Gordn Alexander posted something on this in a recent post "The number one problem?" Go back and find it. It will help BEST of success Samir! Quote:
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![]() Excellent post Duane. Thanks.
Minor point. Shouldn't "TARGETS dictate COPY dictates OFFER" be "TARGETS dictate OFFER dictates COPY" instead? Also - to continute the conversation - what all questions would You ask once you have zero-ed in onto the target? What information would you look out for? |
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![]() Hi Ankesh,
THANKS! Excellent "Eye" by the way...and NO not a "Minor Point" I agree wholeheartedly it should be TARGET dictates OFFER dictates COPY. In terms of order of importance. At least this is how I actually focus on things. The order I originally wrote it was also based on where I wanted Samir to focus his energies based on the questions he asked. I was thinking "Backend Offer" which is why I put it last. Also the first thing I noticed was the sales letter in my "opinion" was not that good. I say "my opinion" because he WAS getting a 3% conversion of cold traffic?? I'm still in shock. So I kinda 'bit my tongue on the sales letter. But I see Cornell already commented on it. There were 3 different "you're probably asking yourself" type questions in the sales-letter. As I was reading I was acting like a potential prospect and I found myself shaking my saying "NO I was not asking that all". So I felt the sales letter was missing the mark by not answering the questions in the Targets brain. So CLARITY of TARGET was the first step. So first Get Clear on the problems of the TARGET then his COPY would improve and then we can figure out what "BACKEND OFFERS" we could try. As for "Offer" Creation itself. THAT would have been a whole other conversation. Which I am sure would come up once he started to re-write that salesletter. But very astute Ankesh. TARGET dictates OFFER dictates COPY is the order of importance. (FYI: Based on Gary Halbert's experience...my phraseology) NEXT You asked. 1. What all questions would You ask once you have zero-ed in onto the target? Hmm not sure what phase of the process you are asking about as i have a LOOONG secret list :-> But the down and dirty answer is. I'm looking for BUYING BEHAVIOR 3 Quick Down and Dirty Questions to get CLARITY about Buying Behavior; 1. What Offers has TARGET bought recently? 2. WHO Sold it to them? How did they sell the OFFER? 3. What Kind of OFFER can I GET and DELIVER that would satisfy the Target? That is basically it. If I were drilling down a little bit more I would say following 3 phased focus questions. 3 PHASED FOCUS QUESTIONS a. TARGET FOCUS questions: There are questions I would FIRST ask to get CLEAR on who my Target is. - Demographic, Psychographic - Age, gender, - Biggest Fears they have about potential product or making the purchase - Hot buttons etc etc. b. COMPETITOR/PARTNER (Player) FOCUS questions: There I would do competitive analysis of the market as a whole. To determine Who the other PLAYERS are, What is their value propositions, and How are they delivering that to the Targets? Can Create a complimentary value and partner? c. MY ADVANTAGE FOCUS questions: I would then determine my/or my clients strengths, weaknesses etc. (Standard SWOT Analysis) to create a better value proposition and win. Not sure if this answered your question or not Ankesh but this is a brief way how I would look at a market before deciding whether to attack it. Cheers Quote:
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