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March 17, 2001, 12:57 AM

Dennis Anglin

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I'm not much of a Press Release expert

Your PR seems too much like a personal experience than a PR. I guess it's the amount of quotes. A good PR should be more "newsy" for a lack of better terms.

Another thing you should avoid is run on sentences. For example: paragragh number eight. Separate the run ons and convert the personal experience quotes into facts and I think you will have a good PR.

Good luck,

Dennis

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