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Old September 15, 2012, 11:39 PM
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Default Re: The Easiest, Fastest Way To Membership Profits

Hi Robert,

Thank you for the feedback.

I like all your suggestions and will put them in.

Glad to hear you were ready to hit the button, that is the point
of any salesletter is to tell the story in such a way for them to take action.

But don't hit the disappearing button because i will send you a copy when it is ready.

Thanks again for your help.

Best of success,

Skip Rosell

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Skip,

A couple thoughts from the peanut gallery ...

1) Profits, yes ... but they are "month after month after month" profits
I would see this major benefit in the headline, or at least the sub-head.

2) You mention "I found a way to make membership sites with no website."
Is this correct? Isn't your method based on having membership websites? Maybe I am missing something, and if so, I apologize!

3) "Most people don't know how to search the internet."
I would add "efficiently" search the internet. Almost everyone knows how to "use" google, but they don't know how to efficiently (and effectively) "get" to the information they are looking for.

I think I would add one word: "Most people done know how to efficiently search the internet."

Also, I think I would try to get the word "effectively" into the copy somewhere, too.

Frankly, I guess the damn sales copy is pretty good, because I'm ready to hit the freakin' "buy now" button already.
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