Your Opinion on This AD Visual Layout and Copy

[MikePT]

Pros,

Your opinion on the visual layout and copy on this AD is welcomed. The AD I am asking your opinion is the second image I attached on this post.


I have a sales letter running inclued with this image , this is an Facebook AD. I am not only running the image alone.

Previously I runned the AD (first image here attached) with the big picture of opening the car that I am attaching here on the post.

On that first AD many people commented and laughing, maybe they didn't understood was being sold an e-book.

That's why now I insert an image of an e-book on the new image AD.

This in an AD running on Facebook Feeds (only to mobile phones) selling a 20€ e-book with 24 tactics on "How To Avoid Being Cheated By Your Mechanic".

Target: 45+ Man interested on cars.


TRANSLATED COPY BELOW OF THE NEW AD:

24 Tactics How To Avoid Being Cheated By Your Mechanic

E-book reveals you 24 tactics how you defend yourself and avoid being cheated by your mechanic. Price: 20€. Order now.

ATTENTION AUTOMOBILE OWNERS: New E-book Reveals How You Can Avoid Being Cheated By Your Mechanic

Thanks