Can you help me evaluate?

Thanks Roger,

I'll find a way to incorporate those bullets onto the main page. I still want it to somehow retain what it already has, not just look like a sales letter. If I can find a way to mesh the two together, I think that would be good.

Thanks again,

Anya.

> Hi Anya

> I`ve just had a look at your site and I am
> sure I have seen the reason for you not
> having any sales.

> Move the bulleted list on your order page to
> your main page,hit your customers with these
> benefits why they should buy your book
> straight away.

> Good Luck

> Roger