Would this be saleable in USA

Roger,
I'd like to talk to you about marketing this product for/with you. Please email me to discuss it further.
I live in the New York Metro area and I can tell you that your product will sell like hotcakes here. With the heightened sense of awareness since 9/11, most everyone is concerned with providing more security for their family. This is an excellent way to do just that.
Because of the nature of the product, I can see this product selling GREAT via door-to-door sales. The moment a prospect opens the door for the salesperson, without asking who it is, they've already sold themselves on why they need the product. Please email me to talk more about this.
Joe Cooper