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-TW
January 16, 2007, 12:58 PM
"How much money is your dealership LOSING because some cars are chipped, scratched or faded?"

...Announcing new 'miracle cure' you can use, FREE!

Then describe a (just ONE) SPECIFIC free trial offer, along with an explatation of WHY you're making this introducory offer (maybe saying how confident you are they'll love it and keep using it. Maybe mentioning that you're 'new in town.'

Can you sueeze in a testimonial from some (or one) of the clients you already heve?

Also, I'd stress that the before/after pix are UNRETOUCHED.

Cheers!

-- TW


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