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Re: Flyer Critique
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Here's How To Get Your Wrought Iron Railings Looking Like New...In A JiffY! (SubHead) Gary The Painter working for "peanuts" making railings gleaming bright on YOUR street tomorrow. Hello Neighbour, My name is Gary, and I'm a hardworking Professional Wrought Iron Painter who takes pride in a job well done. Problem: You're unhappy with the way your railings look Problem: Painting is a pain, and is messy, and makes your clothes dirty and smelly. Besides who has the time? Solution: Get your railings done properly by someone who knows what he's doing. Solution: Your Wrought Iron Railings will sparkle with not just one, but two fresh coats of paints in your choice of colours. Solution: You'd think that a professional painter like me with 15 years experience of painting all types of wrought iron work will charge and arm and a leg, right? Surprise! The cost for a beautiful paint job will be so low, and the service so satisfactory, you'll refer me to all your friends and neighbours (as so many of my customers do). By the way... For the next TWO DAYS ONLY, I'm offering a 20% discount if you refer me to 2 friends or neighbours. I'm looking forward to serving you! Call me right now (Big Bold) Telephone number: 555-555-5555 Sincerely, Your friendly professional, Gary The Painter > I am going to start a Wrought Iron Railing > Painting > business and will be passing out flyers. > This is my first one, what do you think. > Hi, > I will be Painting Wrought Iron Railings on > your street tomorrow. > If you would like to have yours scheduled to > be done, > please give me a call I'll be happy to give > you a free estimate. > Sincerely, > Gary > I am open for any new ideas. The flyer is > designed for to take action now. > Gary, |
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