Can you check my sales letter?

Andras,

Some of the greatest sales letters ever written spotlighted a mouth watering benefit in the headline.

I think you have one but..

it is buried in your copy.

Here is an example:

"We have increased our sales 316% after we started sending our emails from our PC not a mail service"

You buried this little gem in your copy almost has an after thought. Perhaps you should think about putting some form of it in your headline.

Here is one solely as an example...

"I Went From Daily Bounced Emails And No Income To 316% Greater Email Profits In 30 Days--Here's How"

I hope this helps. Let me know.




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